Re: [lojban] First attempt to translate Chinese poem...

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Subject: Re: [lojban] First attempt to translate Chinese poem...
From: "Dániel Arató" <exitconsole@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 26 Nov 2006 14:38:15 +0100
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It appears all right to me, except for the {vau} in the first line:

you don't need it if I'm not mistaken.

And I would have written {le catlu prenu} instead of {le prenu

poi ca catlu} which is a little complicated.

mi'e darves

References:
- [lojban] First attempt to translate Chinese poem...
  - From: "Wang Xuerui" <idontknw.wang@gmail.com>