Re: [lojban] Re: Lojban & poetry

["Jorge Llambias" <jjllambias@hotmail.com>]

la aulun cusku di'e

> Wow - I'm really impressed! And you also got the rhythm. Although I
> never had listened to Lojban before, I think it sounds very
> well.

Thanks! I couldn't get the alfORJA/ROJA/valeROSA echoes though.

> I appreciate your using /penmi/ (.i .oi la nunmra mi ba penmi)
> instead of something like /klode'a/ - the sound is better and
> also the poetical sense.

Yes, I thought so too.

I couldn't think of a short enough word for "alforja"
(saddlebag). And I hope {ctile} is for all kinds of oil,
not just petroleum, otherwise the ctilygrute won't taste
very good.

> Would you mind me including your version into my Lorca page (of
> course mentioning  your copyright)?

No, I wouldn't mind at all, you're welcome to it. One
correction: {darnu} should have been {darno}.

> .oinaicai .i ki'e do'u mi do ckire lenu do pu fanva le vi pemci bau
> la lojban.

je'e co'o mi'e xorxes

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