Re: [lojban] MELBI COI

["Jorge Llambias" <jjllambias@hotmail.com>]

Bellissimo! ki'e doi and

> i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro
> doi melbi coi melbi coi melbi coi coi coi
> i ti xrula lo xarnyfapro
> poi mroselfu le kamzifre
>
> - all improvements welcomed. I particularly struggled with trying to find
> ways to avoid ending lines (fourth lines) on a trochee -- "poi mroselfu
> le kam zifre" is particularly annoying;

It seems to be the only little problem. How about
{poi nunzifre mroselfu io}? (nunzifre seems like something
worth more dying for than kamzifre.)

> it would be nice if Lojban song
> allowed elision of the final vowel of a gismu.

That's Esperanto... :)

> "fe mi litru" ought to be
> "mo'i zo'a mi litru"; I considered "i le be mo'i zo'a mi litru" as an
> alternative.

Yes, but {pe} instead of {be} to be grammatical. I like {fe mi litru}
though.

mu'o mi'e xorxes


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