[lojban] Re: First attempt to translate Chinese poem...

["Andrii (lOkadin) Zvorygin" <lojban-out@lojban.org>]

doi.UAng.

pe'i you did a great job and should put it up on the livejournal .ui

http://community.livejournal.com/lojban/

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mu'omi'e.LOkadin.



On 11/26/06, Jorge Llambías <jjllambias@gmail.com> wrote:
> On 11/26/06, Wang Xuerui <idontknw.wang@gmail.com> wrote:
> > Here's the first poem I've translated from Chinese, .i xu di'e drani xe
> > fanva
> >
> > .i do sanli lo cripu vau gi'e catlu lo jvinu
> > .i tu'i lo dinju le prenu poi ca catlu cu catlu do
> >
> > .i le lunra cu jadni le canko pe do
> > .i do jadni lo senva po'e lo drata prenu
> >
> > I'm not a professional poet, so feel free to give suggestions.
>
> {vau} is not wrong, but it could be elided there.
>
> I'd use {bu'u} instead of {tu'i}. {tu'i} (like stuzi) is for permanent sites,
> not for incidental locations. {bu'u} (like zvati) is the general way to
> indicate where something takes place.
>
> I think you meant {lo se senva be lo drata prenu}. {lo senva} is
> a dreamer, {lo se senva} is a dream.
>
> mu'o mi'e xorxes
>
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