Only took a cursory glance (have to head out shortly) but...In the bottom right panel of the first page I suspect that you meant to say "xamgu mukti" not "kamgu mukti"On Sun, Feb 6, 2011 at 7:04 AM, Remo Dentato <rdentato@gmail.com> wrote:I just started translating a new comic and I'd appreciate your feedback.
I posted a draft for revision here: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7681579/pojbihe.pdf
Just the first two comic panel has been translated (and the cover, and the last page).
Comments and suggestion are really welcome!
remod.
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