On Wed, May 9, 2012 at 3:49 PM, jamatjam
<jammyatjammy@gmail.com> wrote:
coi rodo .i ti pamoi lo mi notci befo levi girzu .i mi'e la mudri .i
ri xa fanva le romoi be le'i mi cmene
fi'i mudri .i tolvai dragau bo pinka so'umei fa lo go'o .i na nitcu tu'a zo be va'o de'u i ki'ubo lu le vi girzu li'u cu te ke ralju joi naltau bridi .i ji'a lo vomoi be lo'i jufra na se smuni lo se djica .ibo zo xa jai se srera
Welcome, mudri . Just a few small critiques. You don't need to use "be" in that sentence, because "le vi girzu" is an argument of the main, non-tanru bridi. Also, the fourth sentence doesn't mean what you want it to. "xa" is a mistake
ni'o ju'ocu'i la lojban. na nitcu kunti bu .i ku'i le jufra po le
notcme cu nitcu kunti bu poi nenri zo rodbo'e ce'o zo bai .i .uanai xu
lo stivla be tepi'o ti cu zasti
zo be za'ure'u na jai se nitcu
"be" is again not necessary.
--gejyspa
IIRC, Lojban doesn't need spaces. However, the sentence in the title
of this message needs a space between {rodbo'e} and {bai}. Is there an
elidable terminator for this?
mu'o
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