> On Wed, May 9, 2012 at 3:49 PM, jamatjam <
jammyatja...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > coi rodo .i ti pamoi lo mi notci befo levi girzu .i mi'e la mudri .i
> > ri xa fanva le romoi be le'i mi cmene
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> fi'i mudri .i tolvai dragau bo pinka so'umei fa lo go'o .i na nitcu tu'a
> zo be va'o de'u i ki'ubo lu le vi girzu li'u cu te ke ralju joi naltau
> bridi .i ji'a lo vomoi be lo'i jufra na se smuni lo se djica .ibo zo xa jai
> se srera
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> Welcome, mudri . Just a few small critiques. You don't need to use "be"
> in that sentence, because "le vi girzu" is an argument of the main,
> non-tanru bridi. Also, the fourth sentence doesn't mean what you want it
> to. "xa" is a mistake
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> > ni'o ju'ocu'i la lojban. na nitcu kunti bu .i ku'i le jufra po le
> > notcme cu nitcu kunti bu poi nenri zo rodbo'e ce'o zo bai .i .uanai xu
> > lo stivla be tepi'o ti cu zasti
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> zo be za'ure'u na jai se nitcu
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> "be" is again not necessary.
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> --gejyspa
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> > IIRC, Lojban doesn't need spaces. However, the sentence in the title
> > of this message needs a space between {rodbo'e} and {bai}. Is there an
> > elidable terminator for this?
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> > mu'o
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