Re: [lojban] djekarni (Diary): le karni fe la timoteios.

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From: Timothy Lawrence <timothy.lawrence@connect.qut.edu.au>

Date: Tue, 9 Aug 2016 06:24:58 +0000

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Thread-topic: [lojban] djekarni (Diary): le karni fe la timoteios.

Merci beaucoup !

From: lojban@googlegroups.com <lojban@googlegroups.com> on behalf of Ilmen <ilmen.pokebip@gmail.com>
Sent: Monday, 8 August 2016 10:51 PM
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Subject: Re: [lojban] djekarni (Diary): le karni fe la timoteios.

On 08/08/2016 11:37, Timothy Lawrence wrote:

Corrigez-moi, s'il vous plaÃ®t, parce que le franÃ§ias n'est pas ma langue maternelle.

→ franÃ§ais

…

Vous Ãªtes invitÃ©s Ã rÃ©pondre

…

Cher journal,

Je m'appelle Timotheos. J'habite en Australie.

Aujourd'hui, j'ai nourri Plipe. Plipe est mon animal de compagnie.
Elle mange de l'herbe parce qu'elle est un criquet.
Cela a pris beaucoup de temps Ã Ã©crire. Je vais Ã©crire encore.

→ Â«je vais Ã©crire encoreÂ» ne sonne pas trÃ¨s naturel, Â«je vais encore Ã©crireÂ» sonne mieux.
Cependant je suggÃ¨re Â«J'Ã©crirai Ã nouveau.Â» (stylistiquement mieux, je trouve).

Ã? part ces deux petits dÃ©tails, ton franÃ§ais est parfait et sonne tout Ã fait naturel. :-)

(Except those two little details, your French is perfect and sounds absolutely natural.)

—Ilmen.

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