[lojban-beginners] Another Song

["Jonathan Gibbons" <jonored@gmail.com>]

Well, all the recent activity with the song-translating led me to try
my hand at it, and I've two verses of one of my favorites translated
in what I hope is decent fashion.

le re simxu mensi pu cadzu .i
to gleki klaku bo donri toi
le re cmalu mensi pu cadzu
re'o le gleki jimca pe la london.

.i le li'erme'i catke le mensi mo'i ne'i
.i to gleki klaku bo donri toi
go'i mo'i ne'i le flecu
re'o le gleki jimca pe la london.

I'll probably have it finished at some point... it's a bit of a long
song, though, "the bonnie boughs of London".

...any suggestions/comments?

-Jonathan