Good stuff but might I make one comment? Would it not be
better to refer to the x1 place (using le or lo) rather than making them
observations?
----- Original Message ----
From: james riley <jimr1603@gmail.com>
To: lojban-beginners@lojban.org
Sent: Monday, 31 March, 2008 4:49:34 PM
Subject: [lojban-beginners] Picture book
Hey all. As some as of you know, I completed my translation of a public domain picture book. You can find it here.
http://cukta.bravehost.com/ Project gutenberg has plenty of children's books that can be translated.
Chances are that a few errors remain. You know that I can be found here or in #lojban. Also, the mouseover text has not been translated. If you can't tell what the picture was supposed to be (and it is old enough to be out of copyright) then just mouseover. Sometimes I oversimplified, sometimes went a bit too complicated.
Now that that's done, I can put some spare time into amending l4b. This will take a while since I've not as much time to put into it as I thought I would have. That and I keep spending half the night on #lojban.
mu'o mi'e cmacis