[lojban-beginners] Re: feedback please

[peter hering <pjhering@gmail.com>]

.i mi kucli le si'o xu se cumki le nu mau re remyma'utei cu ka'e jmive ne'i
le feska'e dakli
    

In this case, for the si'o, a relative question would be more sensible to me,
which is easily accomplished by appending kau to the xu.

I'm not sure, wether the word remyma'utei is appropriate here, as you don't talk
about humans, but flies.
  

.i mi kucli le si'o xukau se cumki le nu mau re za'e sfanyma'utei cu ka'e jmive ne'i le feska'e dakli

jvocuhad offered sfanyma'utei as fly generations.  I've added za'e (which Brett pointed out to me) since it's unlikely that it an official lujvo.

Thank you Timo.  Your feedback is appreciated.

Pete