[lojban-beginners] Re: Can you translate this for me?

["komfo,amonan" <komfoamonan@gmail.com>]

> .i do cirko ro do seldju .e ro do selmo'i .e ro do tertoi
> .i ki'u bo do bredi lo nu se galfi lo denpa vanbi be do

Not to be churlish, but this is why I am uncomfortable with the shortcut {lo broda pe ko'a} == {lo ko'a broda}. In the bridi above, you're modeling {*ro do seldju} after {lo do seldju}. But when you do that, {do} actually binds with {ro}, & the bridi is ungrammatical. So you need {ro lo do seldju} or {ro seldju pe do}. And perhaps {ro seldju be do} is better, if you're not trying to make a distinction with the previous utterance. 

Also, -dju- is the rafsi for {sidju}; all those {seldju} should be {selju'o}. [ /rant ]

mu'o mi'e komfo,amonan