Re: [lojban-beginners] Reuse request

[Jorge Llambías <jjllambias@gmail.com>]

On Tue, May 8, 2012 at 7:52 AM, Jonathan Jones <eyeonus@gmail.com> wrote:
> Anyway, before I upload the modified comic, are there any other errors
> anyone sees?

22/23/24: "ta" should be "tu" since it's away from both speaker and listener.

26: "ji'a" should be after "la clalis" since it's her that is the
additional person having a pet, it's not about her having a pet in
addition to doing something else to it.

31: I would use "bramau" rather than "fi" here. It seems like she's
making straightforward comparisons.

32/33/34: I think "norbra" is better than "na'obra", and I would also
prefer "brana'o" to "na'obra".

38: misplaced "ji'a" again.

43: "sepli" should be "sepsi'u", and "kansa" is about doing something
together, not really about location. I suggest "jonsi'u" or
"tolsepsi'u" instead.

48/49: misplaced "ji'a".

63: To me "ko'a pafspe ko'e" means "ko'a speni lo patfu be ko'e", and
"ko'a be'aspe ko'e" is "ko'a speni lo bersa be ko'e".

64: Similarly for "mamspe" (no need for "y").

67: "pa ki'o pa no no" is "1,100", not "1,000,100", which is "pa ki'o
ki'o pa no no". "du" is better than "mintu" for the equals sign.
Calling "-" sumji and "/" pilji is extremely weird.

72: x3 of "zmadu" should be a property, not a number.

mu'o mi'e xorxes

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