[lojban-beginners] Translating a sentence of "The Scientific Ape"

[Álvaro Vallejo <avallejor@gmail.com>]

Hi,

In The Scientific Ape, the sentence "And therefore we shall take babies, concluded the doctor" is translated as 
".i lu ja'o ma'a ba kavbu lo cifnu li'u".

I would translate it as "".i lu ja'o ma'a ba kavbu lo cifnu sei le prije cusku li'u" 

Is this last an improvement over the original translation?

Thanks.

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