Re: le bruna solri e le mensi lunra

["Jorge J. Llambías" <jorge@xxxxxxxxxx.xxx.xxx]

coi ritcyd i mi do mutce ckire le nu dragau

>I found 3 minor grammatical errors that I had to fix to get it through my
>parser :
>
>> lo banli selmanci gi'e doi galrai cu sinxa do
>
>I think should be
>
>lo banli selmanci gi'e doi galrai do'u sinxa do

Right. I'll change it to {gi'e sinxa doi galrai do} instead. I tend
to forget that vocatives have the grammar of attitudinals, not 
of terms.


>> noi sepi'o ka'e lei do selfinti do se sarji
>
>Not sure on this one, maybe the following is correct?
>
>noi sepi'o lei do selfinti do ka'e se sarji

That was a typo. {ka'e} should have been {ke'a}.


>> le do se djica ku'o ki'u le remoi nunmorsi da na ba xlali
>
>You're trying to qualify a whole sentence with ki'u, you need an
>abstractor somewhere, maybe ...
>
>le do se djica ku'o ki'u lenu le remoi nunmorsi da na ba xlali

Correct.

>Now to start looking through the actual content ...

i ui xamgu

co'o ki'e mi'e xorxes