Re: [lojban] le pamoi nu la brojbogirz. penmi

["Jorge Llambias" <jjllambias@hotmail.com>]

la avital oliver cusku di'e

> Please reply with comments. Thank you.
>
> pu nu'i re lo djedi mi penmi loi pendo

I would have said: {za lo djedi be li re mi pu penmi loi pendo}.

I know that the book proposes the use of termsets for this,
but I find it too confusing, I'm not even sure of the grammar
of termsets, so I can't tell if your sentence is correct.

Also {re lo djedi} is not strictly a period of two days duration,
but two separate periods of one day. It would mean that you met
on two occasions.

> .i le girzu fi ze lo prenu .e re lo prenu ba jorne le
> gy.

{le gy} is incorrect, it should be just {gy}.

Also, you have {ze lo prenu e re lo prenu} filling
the x3 place of {jorne}.

You want something like {le girzu cu zemei ije re prenu
ba jorne gy}

> .i puki mi tavla fi le citri nu la lojban.

le citri be la lojban

> .e ba fe mi'a nunsnu fi

{ije} instead of {e}, which is only for joining sumti.

> le se smadi nu la sapir,uorf. ku

{le se smadi be la sapir,uorf}, {ku} not needed.

> je loi mupli be le nu la lojban.
> xamgu mau le glibau

{e} instead of {je}.

{la lojban xamgu mau le glibau} means "Lojban is good
with English as more". You mean something like {la lojban
cu xagmau le glibau}.

co'o mi'e xorxes


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