Re: [lojban] [update] le virnu smani blozeile'a

[Remo Dentato <rdentato@gmail.com>]

2010/9/18 Jorge Llambías <jjllambias@gmail.com>:
> On Fri, Sep 17, 2010 at 5:23 PM, Remo Dentato <rdentato@gmail.com> wrote:
>> I posted a new version of "le virnu smani blozeile'a" here:
>>
>
> 1- I still don't understand "lo (...) lanci be tu'i le kampu kumfa".
>
> How can the living-room be the site of the flag if they are in a
> store? And flags hardly have inalienable locations, since they are
> easily movable objects, not like a monument or a mountain.

That's probably my poor understanding of tu'i. jbovlaste gives:
  "associated with site ...,"
and I want to express that I'm talking about the a flag that will be
related to the livinig room (in fact you will see it again in the page
when the father comes back to work).
Yes flags can be moved but I hoped I could make clear that that
specific flag is meant to be hang in the living room (and stay there).
What would you suggest for that?

> 2- You don't really need "kei" in "le nu skorbuti [kei] .a zo'e" (this
> appears twice)
Right! Thanks

> 3- ".ije my le nu klama lo mikce briju kei skicu le patfu"
> You need "kei ku" there or just use "cu" instead.
I use cu now

> 4- "... gi'e cpare lo pojma'a noi culno lo fagri rumro'i / gi'e ..."
> You need to end that "noi" with "ku'o".
My bad, I hadn't tested the entire text, just the separated sentences .(

> 5- I would use "tolcri" instead of "facki". He didn't find out facts
> about the mafcre, he found the mafcre.
I should look at "tol" more closely. It seems I don't get it entirely ...
Thanks

> 6- The braxiura mafcre uses two unnecessary "ku"'s.
I probably had them while trying to put all sentences together and
didn't realize they were no longer needed.

Thanks xorxes!

Remo

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