Re: [lojban] Re: lo selsanga pe la'o dy. Bodo Wartke .dy zi'e po'u la'o dy. Liebeslied .dy

[Paul Predkiewicz <paul.predkiewicz@gmail.com>]

Sorry to interrupt in english, but my lojban is only as good as to understand this is about the song Liebeslied from Bodo Wartke and that you have come up with a verse already, but cant find the gismu rimni or the rafsi rim anywhere here. I just wanted to say that bodo has also provided a blueprint for the rhyming.

i.e.:

Ich will's in allen Sprachen für dich singen(a),

auf allen Instrumenten zum Erklingen(a) bringen(a).

Ich(b)   [kinda long pause]

liebe dich(b).

in which (a) is the first rhymeword,

(a)(a) two words which rhyme on the first rhymeword,

(b) is the second rhymeword and again

(b) a word that rhymes on the second rhymeword.

in case you got all that already covered, disregard all of this

mlatu

2012/8/16 v4hn <me@v4hn.de>

On Tue, Aug 14, 2012 at 01:22:19PM -0700, iesk wrote:
> coi la .van.
>
> .i ckire do lonu jungau .i la'o dy. Liebeslied .dy pe la .bodos.vartkys. mi
> slabu .i puku mi facki lo du'u da ja'a fanva fi la .lojban.

.iua mi na pu djuno

> .i xe fanva
>
> «lu tu'e
>  .ai mi dei do ge sanga bau ro bangu
>  gi se pi'o ro cabra ku zgicusku
>  .i .iu ju'o
>  mi prami do
> tu'u li'u»

.iuisai mi nelci ti .i lo mi xe fanva be ly ku pare'u jai se troci be mi

> .i jinvi lo du'u lo du'u sei gerna
> .u'i se'u so'o xe fanva cu zasti kei cu cinri je se kucli je xe cilre

je'e

> .i .ui nai la .bodos. na sanga vau za'a

.i xu la .bodos. pu spuda lo mrilu gi'e cusku lo krinu be lonu na pilno lo selsabji
.i da'i ganai mi ba penmi by gi mi te preti fo by

mu'o mi'e la .van.

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