Re: [lojban] CLL v1.1: Visual commentary, please.

[Robin Lee Powell <rlpowell@digitalkingdom.org>]

On Mon, Jul 20, 2015 at 01:35:52PM +0200, selpa'i wrote:
> la .camgusmis. cu cusku di'e
> >http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-07-20.pdf
> >is my attempt to merge everybody's thoughts about spacing.
> >Compare
> >http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_build-2015-06-20/cll_prince.pdf
> >
> >It has *MUCH* less vertical whitespace, in basically every
> >department.  It also has smaller headers.  And less indentation.
> >
> >Sentences after examples and the like that appear to be
> >continuations (i.e. start with lower case) are not indented.
> >
> >I think that's most of it.
> >
> >Thoughts?
> 
> There is too little space around the examples and cmavo tables
> now, so they almost disappear into the surrounding paragraphs. I
> don't know if it's due to a missing line break or something else.

Try this:
http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-08-12.pdf

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