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Re: [lojban] CLL v1.1: Visual commentary, please.



Agreed that the examples probably need a half-space or proper typesetting equivalent before and after them.

The headers and indentation seem good to me,


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On Mon, Jul 20, 2015 at 7:35 AM, selpa'i <seladwa@gmx.de> wrote:
la .camgusmis. cu cusku di'e
http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_prince_spacing_test_2015-07-20.pdf
is my attempt to merge everybody's thoughts about spacing.  Compare
http://vrici.lojban.org/~rlpowell/media/public/cll_build-2015-06-20/cll_prince.pdf

It has *MUCH* less vertical whitespace, in basically every
department.  It also has smaller headers.  And less indentation.

Sentences after examples and the like that appear to be
continuations (i.e. start with lower case) are not indented.

I think that's most of it.

Thoughts?

There is too little space around the examples and cmavo tables now, so they almost disappear into the surrounding paragraphs. I don't know if it's due to a missing line break or something else.

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