[lojban-beginners] Re: Newbie help please - music lyrics

["Jorge Llambías" <jjllambias@gmail.com>]

On Wed, Apr 2, 2008 at 11:41 AM, LakMeer Kravid <lakmeerkravid@gmail.com> wrote:
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> Does 4 suggest that {le zgivo'a pe le fetcei cu} can become {le
> zgivo'a le fetcei cu} be just dropping {pe},

No, you need {be} there. Othewise you have two unconnected sumti
filling the x1 and x2 of whatever selbri follows {cu}.

> 5: If {di'u} refers specifically to the utterance, does that include
> the concept that it conveys? The intension of that line is that what I
> just said is an example of the rules of the game.

I suppose the x1 of javni is the text of the rule and the x2 is the
content. In any case {la'e di'u} gets what the text refers to.

> Updated lyrics, where I'm aware that {xarxei} is incorrect but at this
> stage i'm unsure of how to correct it:

It would be {xarnunxei}, but that probably breaks the flow.

mu'o mi'e xorxes