[lojban-beginners] Re: Translation effort...

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[Jorge Llambías:] 

> The difference between {gunka fi le nu lo'e remna cu tolcurve} and
> {gunka fi le nu lo'e remna cu tolcuvbi'o} would be that the first is
> "work to keep them corrupt" and the second is "work to make them corrupt".

Thanks for the clarification.

Here is my attempt at translating the second sentence:

		Secular Humanists define Evil as any behavior that enhances
		an individual's success at the expense of the success of
		others.

	i lo'e narjda remna se tadni krici cu te smuni le ka palci le ro
	seltra poi da zo'u ge le da se snada cu zenba gi le na'e da se snada
	cu jdika

Please comment. Thanks!

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