[lojban-beginners] Re: Translation effort...

[c1tk@c1tk.cjb.net]

Hello all,

[Jorge Llambías:]

> > 		Secular Humanists define Evil as any behavior that enhances
> > 		an individual's success at the expense of the success of
> > 		others.
> > 	i lo'e narjda remna se tadni krici cu te smuni le ka palci le ro
> > 	seltra poi da zo'u ge le da se snada cu zenba gi le na'e da se snada
> > 	cu jdika
> [{na'e bo da} instead of {na'e da}.]

Thanks, however I still do not understand why a {bo} is needed here. (I can
see though that {remna se tadni} should really be {remna bo se tadni}.)
Please enlighten.

Here is my attempt at translating the remainder:

		And I define Evil as the enjoyment I get from watching
		thousands of innocents squirm in terror as I destroy the
		very underpinnings of everything they believe and hold dear
		in my quest to command supreme domination over all life.

	ije mi te smuni le ka palci le mi se pluka poi mi zgana le nu so'i
	na zekri prenu cu terpa na cando ku'o fi'o temci le nu ge mi zalvi
	ro ra se krici jicmu gi mi dirba gunka fi le nu mi mulno jitro ro
	jmive

		EVIL IS NOT A PHILOSOPHY. IT IS NEITHER A MEANS NOR AN END.
		IT IS AN ATTITUDE AND A LIFESTYLE.

	i le ka palci cu se krici ciste i ri genai tadji ginai jalge i ri ge
	menli tarti gi jmive morna

		Make no excuses. Support no ideology. Never explain. You're
		EVIL. Just do it.

	i ko bacru no krinu i ko sarji no ciste krici i ko no da ciksi i do
	palci i ko frili gasnu

Once more, please comment. Thanks!

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