The second {py} needs a pause, and you probably want to use
{se bangu} instead of {tavla fo} there, as well.
Oh yeah, thanks, I didn't notice it. sa'enai mi pu noroi pidsversra lo verba poi na se bangu le mi verclibau noi spano .isemu'ibo ca lonu mi ca'o tcidu le py. sivni datni kei mi frati co jundi lonu py. se bangu lo pilpino po'o Anything else?