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Re: [lojban] Religious document translation.



thanks for the input. I intentionally ignored the cmevla convention for aesthetic reasons. For some reason, when i pasted the document in, some words lost their spaces between them. this is not a problem in the original document, and i dont know what caused it. nor did i notice until you brought it up. i will check out my lujvo to make sure they validate properly.

thanks



-----Original Message-----
From: Lindar <lindarthebard@yahoo.com>
To: lojban <lojban@googlegroups.com>
Sent: Sat, Aug 28, 2010 3:58 pm
Subject: [lojban] Religious document translation.

RE: Correct e-mail.

Yeah, it is.

You can also go to http://groups.google.com/group/lojban/ to browse
through old threads.

RE: Translation.
You're missing dotside on your cmevla (whether or not you care is
another issue entirely), your grouping is confusing (article 2
"madzeienai" needs denpa bu, article 3 "tadjilo" and article 13
"siskutu'a" you need to either use whitespace or mark emphasis because
this breaks apart to {ta djIlo} not {tAdji lo} and {siskUtu'a} not
{sIsku tu'a}) and you have a few invalid words (line 4 "lo
nunmadxagtik" is not valid), and you have some unnecessary usage of
{cu} (on line 8 "la biblos. cu selsku", which actually doesn't make
sense, btw). (While we're on the topic, you should never have to use
CU, so if it looks like you need it, then you need to not use it and
study more instead.)

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