thanks a lot for taking the time to help me. you did not bring up any of the problem i expected to be found, so either you did not notice them, or i did them correctly, which was my major concern. it turns out a majority of your corrections were an error in the email. all of the problems with spacing are not in the original document, they somehow occurred when i pasted it into the email. i will work on better lujvo-making.
a lot of my naming conventions were simply how majority of mormons pronounce them, or a slight variation thereon. i would go back to the original pronunciations, but i do not have the resources for such a venture, nor would the names be recognizable according to our (mi'a) culture's standardized methods, which are often very malmerko. a lot of the time, i try to keep the feeling of the original document, even with stylistic changes.
thanks again. If you find other problems, feel free to call me out on them. I am working on a similar, but larger project now, and that will have to be reviewed eventually. I will need tons of help with the editing at that point.
seryf
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