If you're going to mark punctuation, I'd prefer you be consistent. For example, "lu<<...>>li'u" but "(to...toi)"? The punctuation should be the same, so "to(...)toi".
I still don't like the capitalization.
I think that a proficient jbopre, preferably Jorge, he being the author, should go through your work and make sure that things such as what I've pointed out are corrected, such as putting the {.} in the right place, and preferably in all the places that {.} has been optionally removed.
On Tue, Mar 30, 2010 at 7:35 AM, Michael Everson
<michael.everson@gmail.com> wrote:
On 30 Mar 2010, at 11:32, Remo Dentato wrote:
> I think that an example of a page with lojban text composed according your proposal would be very beneficial for the discussion.
OK. I mocked this up quite quickly. First, look again at the Yiddish example:
Then, have a look at the Lojban:
http://www.evertype.com/books/alice-jbo-p.1.png
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mu'o mi'e .aionys.
.i.a'o.e'e ko klama le bende pe denpa bu