I voted "yes", but the translation of "so'i lo prenu" should be "many of the people", not "many people". Also, I would remove this comment "(natural, may not be correct: 01 Jul 2004 12:41:13 doi jbokaj li ne'u mu)", or else explain what it means.
Voted "yes". Not sure about these translations though:
mi ga'u lo ba'e tolxanri bloti cu co'e
On top of the boat, I do something.
ma pu ga'u muvdu
What moved above you?
What happened to "ba'e tolxanri" and where did "you" come from?
lo gunma be lo crino lo slanydi'u cu sanli ti'a lo crino bitmu A mass of green towers stood behind a green wall.